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all corrections are written in capital letters. sorry if the caps lock thing is annoying. it just made the corrections stick out a little bit.
I really want to get into THE BUSINESS OF designING houseS or FIND advertising agents that offer JOBS IN DESIGN. luckily, I see THAT your team portfolio not only shows a lot of style in ITS different works but also welcomeS fresh graduateS to join in; this is the best chance for me to gain experience and learn in the real WORKPLACE. besideS that, i really need a job to ALLOW my life be stable. (the last sentence could be better revised as "Besides that, i really need a job to lend my life some stability.")