我想問下,下面ge句子有咩錯? (tanes ) ★10點★

1. I have not seen her (four four) years. I miss her so much ! 寫eight應該得
2. She (sets off) in a ship and wears up as a pirate.寫get into 應該得
3. She fights brave but her father (dies) in the end.寫died

注:有括狐的範圍的字是錯的。

Hi,
The first sentence should be rewritten as:

1)I have not seen her for four years. I miss her so much!

About the second and third of your sentences, please take a look at the following sentences.

2)She dressed up as a pirate and set off in a ship.( I guess she dressed up as a pirate first then left.if not, you may write " She set off in a ship and dressed up as a pirate.".

Note: set( present tense) set( past tense) set ( past participle)
dress( present tense) dressed( past tense) dressed( past participle)

You should use simple past tense here to talk about something that happened in the past.( She set off in a ship<----- This sentence shows that she LEFT.)





3) She fought bravely, but her father died in the end.

Note:
You should use simple past tense. ( fight fought<--- past tense here fought)
The past tense of " die" is " died".
" but" is used as a conjunction in your sentence, you need to use a comma there and " brave" is an adjective only; you then have to change it to an adverb which is " bravely.

That's all.
:)
Cheers

1. I have not seen her four four years. I miss her so much!
不是four four day,係for fourday

2. She sets off in a ship and wears up as a pirate.
Ans:不是wear係dresses up

3. She fights brave but her father dies in the end.
Ans:不是fights係fought.



i hope i can help you

1.I have not seen her (for) four years.I miss her so much!

2.She sets off in a ship and (dresses) up as a pirate.

3.She fights bravely but her father dies in the end.

你係唔係小六，我係！

這份好似係S.E 2 因為我做左，老師仲改左，個答案一定對!

1.I have not seen her for four years. I miss her so much!
2.She got on the ship and dressed up as a pirate.
3.She fought(past tense) bravely but her father died at the end.

2008-10-15 18:39:48 補充：
Hope I can help you.
When you use "wear"----you say "wear clothes", "wear a hat", "wear shoes" but you do not "wear up as a pirate", instead, you use "dress up"
Sets off----The ship sets off, not the girl! A girl could only got on the ship.
Bravely is an adverb. We use it after a verb----fought(fight).

1. I have not seen her for four years. I miss her so much !
2. She sets off in a ship and wears up as a pirate.
3. She fights brave but her father died in the end.