✔ 最佳答案
請讓我說樓上犯了甚麼錯:
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Tense
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Some of them are singular
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Wrong usage of some words
改一改:
Since(1) childhood/(2) I was young (建議用(2)), I have been to lots of places(countries較好), experienced different matters, and all these inspired my dream.