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Indexes of fianacial marker keep falling down recently. Many people loss money, business close, and unemployment rate rasie.Moreover, because of the falling indexes, the economy is depression. People would like to keep their money in porkets. They fear to lose jobs, and bosses are holding the plan to have salary increase. Therefore, People is looking for a help from govement, hoping the financial market can be restored.

The sustained drops in financial market index causes people keep losing much money in their investments. During such economic depression, businesses are getting worse and the unemployment rate will rise. People just afraid if they are going to lose their job, while employers are expected to cut the subsidies and salaries. People won't spend too much money even on daily necessities. They are expecting some government policies concerning the downturn so as to help restore their confidence in the economy.

另外，實在有太多wrong spelling，請多加留意！
fianacial -> financial
casued -> caused
enconomy -> economy
unemployment -> unemployment
subsidise ans -> subsidies and??
employment -> employment
government -> government

Recently, the index of the financial market is continuously going down, it has already caused many people lost a lot of money in the financial trading market. And it also caused the economy downgrading and led to a depression scene. The stores' business will be bad, the unemployment rate will be rising, many people therefore fear to lose their job, and the employers will start to cut the subsidiary and reduce the salary rate. Many people now don't expend much money on the consumer goods. People want the government to give help and make schemes to deal the financial crisis in order to ensure peoples’ confidence.