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Last Saturday,my mother,sister and Iwent to Tunmen City Centre shopping.
When I wakr up,I brush my teeth,then l leave home.
In the Tunmen City Centre,we go shopping.Next we felt hungry,so we went to
close-by restaurant eat some things.When we felt full we to keep on shopping.
Moreover,we took a bus went back home.
Today,I was so happy beause I can go shopping with my family.
2008-10-11 09:31:04 補充:
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第1句係:Last Saturday,my mother,sister and I went to Tunmen City Centre shopping.
2008-10-11 09:34:09 補充:
第2句係:When I wake up,I brush my teeth,then we leave home.
第4句係:close-by restaurant to eat some things.When we felt,full we to keep on shopping.
第3句係:Today,I was so happy because I can go shopping with my family