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前者的翻譯，我有少少不認同，雖然我都唔識......慚愧的
Yesterday, I went swimming with my classmates in Shek O. We got to the beach quite early and there were only a few people around. Then I noticed myfavourite idol, Horikawa Ryo.

I talked with him and said:"how are you?
" Also I said I like your cartoons very much,do you know I am your fans?"
He answered to me" that's great,thank. what you name?"
I told him my name is Winner and said" do you mind sign you name on my paper? He is very nice because he did not mind sign his name.
Finally, I wish he do his best job!!

Yesterday was a wonderful day. I could swimming in the beach and found Horikawa Ryo got his sign.

我都是錯的^^
我會翻譯給您，但.....
但您似寫劇本多過作文啊~ 減少對白，多些描寫環境和感受啦~

Title: My Encounter with Horikawa Ryo

Yesterday, I went swimming with my classmates in Shek O. We got
to the beach quite early and there were only a few people around. Then
I noticed myfavourite idol, Horikawa Ryo. I go forward with him to
speak "hello? I like you very much for these cartoons character, I am
your fans!" He then and I said "is, I am very good, thank you! What do
you call?" I then tell him me to call Winnie. I have taken a version
afterwards and sign the masterpiece to let him help me to sign I also
returned to the sentence to thank Finally, I said "hoped he continues
to complete dubbing, diligently refuels!"

Yesterday really was Wonderful Day. I may smoothly swim in the sand
beach, also may attain the idol the signature

2008-10-12 22:28:09 補充：
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Title: My Encounter with Horikawa Ryo

Yesterday, I went swimming with my classmates in Shek O. We got to the beach quite early and there were only a few people around. Then I noticed myfavourite idol, Horikawa Ryo. And I came up to him, "How are you? I am You like those cartoon characters, I am your fans! "He and I would say" yes, I am good, thank you! What's your name? "I told him I called Winnie. After I took a version and Signed him to help me pen signature. I thank you back to the sentence. Finally, I said, "I hope he continues to do a good voice, and strive!"

Yesterday was a Wonderful Day. I can swim on the beach and get the signature icon!