英文作交修改(200 words) 20 points~~

I‘ll never forget what happened this sunny afternoon. Today’s morning, Peter and I went to the playground to play.
When we were on our way to the playground, we saw a robber, broking into a Jewellery shop to rob some jewelleries. The robber was young and he felt frightened when ran away with necklaces and gold after he noticed us. We followed him as fast as we can. We also called the police while we were running after him. Lastly, we caught the robber and the policemen came.
Suddenly, I heard someone saying, “ Oh! What happened?” Then the policemen said, “Little boys, this is not a real robbery, it is just a film, the robber is Peter Cohen.”“The famous Actor!” I shouted. We apologized to the director and all who was disturbed by us. In surprise, the director said, “Little boys, you did not have to apologize. I decided to change the story to “Two boys and the Robbery” as I thought the new story was even better.” We thanked him a lot and got Peter Cohen’s autograph.
After that, we went to the playground with excitement about being actors.