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Grand Century Place is one of (one of what/where?)the biggest shopping centre in Hong Kong. It is 34 restaurants and 41 boutiques ,it is so many.(這兒最好是寫There are 34 restaurants and 41 boutiques，It is是這是，There are是這兒有。另外，寫記述文時盡量不要加個人意見)

At Grand Centre Place, there are many variety kinds of shop, (不應用,，應用;並加上for example:)restaurant, boutique supermarket, shoe shop, toy shop, etc.(這兒不宜列舉太多類型，別人對這文的可能是湊字數)

Highlight
Children's Playground
It is children favourite. Children can go to play in there.(位置？開放時間？說得太少)

Events
Hush Puppies 50th Birthday Present SPCA Summer Exhibition
It is many animals to walk. IT is start from 12th Sept.(活動建議不寫，因為商場每星期都有不同的活動，可試寫人流、交通等)

(以上兩個範疇請用段落形式寫，因為這是一篇文。)

Grand Century Place is one of the biggest shopping centre in Hong Kong. It has 34 restaurants and 41 boutiques.

At Grand Centre Place, there are various kinds of shops,for instance, restaurants, boutiques, supermarkets, shoe shops,toy shops, etc.

Highlight
Children's Playground
It is children's favorite.
Children can go there and play.



Events
Hush Puppies 50th Birthday Present SPCA Summer Exhibition
Puppies compete to be the fastest runner. It starts from 12th Sept.

2008-10-04 21:19:18 補充：
Grand Century Place is one of the biggest shopping centres in Hong Kong. It has 34 restaurants and 41 boutiques

(should be "centres" instead of centre)