Janet has printed out a blog entry she wrote about her best friend. Her teacher read it and found some mistakes. Help Janet to correct the mistakes by underlining them and writing the correct words above the underlined words. Ther is one mistake in each numbered line.
好似下面果個was咁係錯既~就係則邊括住正確答案
左邊既數字係行數
1 My best friend is Diane Lam. She was(is) twelve years old. She was
2 born in Hong Kong, but she living in Vancouver, Canada, so she
3 sometimes missed Hong Kong.
4 Diane is very clever. She studies every night and always got good marks
5 in school. She spoke several languages, including Cantonses,
6 Putonghua, English and French. Her parents wants her to become a
7 doctor when she grows up. I thinks she would be a great doctor!
8 Diane is also very sporty. Her favourite sports were football, volleyball
9 and hockey. When I play sports, I was quite clumsy, but not Diane. She
10 never trips or stumbles like I do, and she run very fast. In fact, I don't
11 knows anyone who can run as fast as she can.
12 Diane and I writes to each other quite often. We sometimes also chat
13 online. I hoped I can visit her in Vancouver this summer.
英文改錯字 40點
2008-10-05 1:43 am
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2008-10-14 1:58 am
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1 My best friend is Diane Lam. She was(is) twelve years old. She was2 born in Hong Kong, but she(is) living in Vancouver ,(and) Canada, so she
3 sometimes missed(misses) Hong Kong.
4 Diane is very clever. She studies every night and always got(gets) good marks
5 in school. She spoke several languages, including Cantonses,
6 Putonghua, English and French. Her parents wants(want) her to become a
7 doctor when she grows up. I thinks(think) she would be a great doctor!
8 Diane is also very sporty. Her favourite sports were(are) football, volleyball
9 and hockey. When I play sports, I was quite clumsy, but not Diane. She
10 never trips or stumbles like I do, and she run very fast. In fact, I don't
11 knows(know) anyone who can run as fast as she can.
12 Diane and I writes(write) to each other quite often. We sometimes also chat
13 online. I hoped I can visit her in Vancouver this summer.
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2008-10-14 10:39 pm
My best friend is Diane Lam. She was(is) twelve years old. She was
2 born in Hong Kong, but she(is) living in Vancouver ,(and) Canada, so she
3 sometimes missed(misses) Hong Kong.
4 Diane is very clever. She studies every night and always got(gets) good marks
5 in school. She spoke several languages, including Cantonses,
6 Putonghua, English and French. Her parents wants(want) her to become a
7 doctor when she grows up. I thinks(think) she would be a great doctor!
8 Diane is also very sporty. Her favourite sports were(are) football, volleyball
9 and hockey. When I play sports, I was quite clumsy, but not Diane. She
10 never trips or stumbles like I do, and she run very fast. In fact, I don't
11 knows(know) anyone who can run as fast as she can.
12 Diane and I writes(write) to each other quite often. We sometimes also chat
13 online. I hoped I can visit her in Vancouver this summer.
2 born in Hong Kong, but she(is) living in Vancouver ,(and) Canada, so she
3 sometimes missed(misses) Hong Kong.
4 Diane is very clever. She studies every night and always got(gets) good marks
5 in school. She spoke several languages, including Cantonses,
6 Putonghua, English and French. Her parents wants(want) her to become a
7 doctor when she grows up. I thinks(think) she would be a great doctor!
8 Diane is also very sporty. Her favourite sports were(are) football, volleyball
9 and hockey. When I play sports, I was quite clumsy, but not Diane. She
10 never trips or stumbles like I do, and she run very fast. In fact, I don't
11 knows(know) anyone who can run as fast as she can.
12 Diane and I writes(write) to each other quite often. We sometimes also chat
13 online. I hoped I can visit her in Vancouver this summer.
2008-10-14 2:02 am
1 My best friend is Diane Lam. She was (is) twelve years old. She was
2 born in Hong Kong, but she living in Vancouver, Canada, so she
3 sometimes missed Hong Kong.
4 Diane is very clever. She studies every night and always got good marks
5 in school. She spoke several languages, including Cantonese,
6 Putonghua, English and French. Her parents want her to become a
7 doctor when she grows up. I think she would be a great doctor!
8 Diane is also very sporty. Her favorite sports were football, volleyball
9 and hockey. When I play sports, I was quite clumsy, but not Diane. She
10 never trips or stumbles like I do, and she run very fast. In fact, I don't
11 knows anyone who can run as fast as she can.
12 Diane and I writes to each other quite often. We sometimes also chat
13 online. I hoped I can visit her in Vancouver this summer.
2 born in Hong Kong, but she living in Vancouver, Canada, so she
3 sometimes missed Hong Kong.
4 Diane is very clever. She studies every night and always got good marks
5 in school. She spoke several languages, including Cantonese,
6 Putonghua, English and French. Her parents want her to become a
7 doctor when she grows up. I think she would be a great doctor!
8 Diane is also very sporty. Her favorite sports were football, volleyball
9 and hockey. When I play sports, I was quite clumsy, but not Diane. She
10 never trips or stumbles like I do, and she run very fast. In fact, I don't
11 knows anyone who can run as fast as she can.
12 Diane and I writes to each other quite often. We sometimes also chat
13 online. I hoped I can visit her in Vancouver this summer.
2008-10-10 1:38 am
2 born in Hong Kong, but she (lives) in Vancouver, Canada, so she
3 sometimes (misses) Hong Kong.
4 Diane is very clever. She studies every night and always (gets) good marks
5 in school. She (speaks) several languages, including Cantonses,
6 Putonghua, English and French. Her parents want her to become a
7 doctor when she (grown) up. I thinks she would be a great doctor!
8 Diane is also very sporty. Her favourite sports (are) football, volleyball
9 and hockey. When I play sports, I (am) quite clumsy, but not Diane. She
10 never trips or stumbles like I do, and she (runs) very fast. In fact, I don't
11 (know) anyone who can run as fast as she can.
12 Diane and I (write) to each other quite often. We sometimes also chat
13 online. I (hope) I can visit her in Vancouver this summer.
It is actually very easy, it is mainly the verbs that are wrong, he she it have to add s and i we they no s
English is fun, try to do yr hw next time
3 sometimes (misses) Hong Kong.
4 Diane is very clever. She studies every night and always (gets) good marks
5 in school. She (speaks) several languages, including Cantonses,
6 Putonghua, English and French. Her parents want her to become a
7 doctor when she (grown) up. I thinks she would be a great doctor!
8 Diane is also very sporty. Her favourite sports (are) football, volleyball
9 and hockey. When I play sports, I (am) quite clumsy, but not Diane. She
10 never trips or stumbles like I do, and she (runs) very fast. In fact, I don't
11 (know) anyone who can run as fast as she can.
12 Diane and I (write) to each other quite often. We sometimes also chat
13 online. I (hope) I can visit her in Vancouver this summer.
It is actually very easy, it is mainly the verbs that are wrong, he she it have to add s and i we they no s
English is fun, try to do yr hw next time
2008-10-05 3:10 am
1 My best friend is Diane Lam. She was(is) twelve years old. She was
2 born in Hong Kong, but she (is) living in Vancouver,(and) Canada, so she
3 sometimes missed(misses) Hong Kong.
4 Diane is very clever. She studies every night and always got(gets) good marks
5 in school. She spoke(is speaks) several languages, including Cantonses,
6 Putonghua, English and French. Her parents wants(want) her to become a
7 doctor when she grows up. I thinks(think) she would be a great doctor!
8 Diane is also very sporty. Her favourite sports were(are) football, volleyball
9 and hockey. When I play sports, I was quite clumsy, but not(doesn"t) Diane. She
10 never trips or stumbles like I do, and she run very fast. In fact, I don't
11 knows anyone who can run as fast as she can.
12 Diane and I writes(writes) to each other quite often. We sometimes also chat
13 online. I hoped (+that) I can visit(-can visit,+would visit) her in Vancouver this summer.
2008-10-04 19:13:25 補充：
我觉得roytsecn比较好,可能是对的。
2 born in Hong Kong, but she (is) living in Vancouver,(and) Canada, so she
3 sometimes missed(misses) Hong Kong.
4 Diane is very clever. She studies every night and always got(gets) good marks
5 in school. She spoke(is speaks) several languages, including Cantonses,
6 Putonghua, English and French. Her parents wants(want) her to become a
7 doctor when she grows up. I thinks(think) she would be a great doctor!
8 Diane is also very sporty. Her favourite sports were(are) football, volleyball
9 and hockey. When I play sports, I was quite clumsy, but not(doesn"t) Diane. She
10 never trips or stumbles like I do, and she run very fast. In fact, I don't
11 knows anyone who can run as fast as she can.
12 Diane and I writes(writes) to each other quite often. We sometimes also chat
13 online. I hoped (+that) I can visit(-can visit,+would visit) her in Vancouver this summer.
2008-10-04 19:13:25 補充：
我觉得roytsecn比较好,可能是对的。
參考: maybe is right.
2008-10-05 1:54 am
1 My best friend is Diane Lam. She was(is) twelve years old. She was
2 born in Hong Kong, but she(is) living in Vancouver ,(and) Canada, so she
3 sometimes missed(misses) Hong Kong.
4 Diane is very clever. She studies every night and always got(gets) good marks
5 in school. She spoke several languages, including Cantonses,
6 Putonghua, English and French. Her parents wants(want) her to become a
7 doctor when she grows up. I thinks(think) she would be a great doctor!
8 Diane is also very sporty. Her favourite sports were(are) football, volleyball
9 and hockey. When I play sports, I was quite clumsy, but not Diane. She
10 never trips or stumbles like I do, and she run very fast. In fact, I don't
11 knows(know) anyone who can run as fast as she can.
12 Diane and I writes(write) to each other quite often. We sometimes also chat
13 online. I hoped I can visit her in Vancouver this summer.
我的英文不太好~可是我把你的文章當作是prove reading。我看到你錯的大多是把「I」後面的動詞 加「s/es」這是錯誤的。另外你也把「Diane and I」後面的動詞加「s/es」那也是錯的。其實Simple Present Tense只會把「HE、SHE、IT」後面的動詞加「s/es」。還有~你有些句子太長~有時候句子太長讓人覺得很累，你可以少用一些「，」把它們轉成句子，這樣看比較好一點。
再重申一次！我的英文真的不太好。希望我幫你改的是對的。
2 born in Hong Kong, but she(is) living in Vancouver ,(and) Canada, so she
3 sometimes missed(misses) Hong Kong.
4 Diane is very clever. She studies every night and always got(gets) good marks
5 in school. She spoke several languages, including Cantonses,
6 Putonghua, English and French. Her parents wants(want) her to become a
7 doctor when she grows up. I thinks(think) she would be a great doctor!
8 Diane is also very sporty. Her favourite sports were(are) football, volleyball
9 and hockey. When I play sports, I was quite clumsy, but not Diane. She
10 never trips or stumbles like I do, and she run very fast. In fact, I don't
11 knows(know) anyone who can run as fast as she can.
12 Diane and I writes(write) to each other quite often. We sometimes also chat
13 online. I hoped I can visit her in Vancouver this summer.
我的英文不太好~可是我把你的文章當作是prove reading。我看到你錯的大多是把「I」後面的動詞 加「s/es」這是錯誤的。另外你也把「Diane and I」後面的動詞加「s/es」那也是錯的。其實Simple Present Tense只會把「HE、SHE、IT」後面的動詞加「s/es」。還有~你有些句子太長~有時候句子太長讓人覺得很累，你可以少用一些「，」把它們轉成句子，這樣看比較好一點。
再重申一次！我的英文真的不太好。希望我幫你改的是對的。
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