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2008-10-04 8:52 pm

List three most important people you know. Then explain why these people are important to you.

The first people important to me is my mother, because she really be responsible my life so much. For example, if I were sick, she will take a day off purposely to look after for me. And then, when the examination was coming, she will accompany me to revise. Finally, no matter I do anything wrong, my mother always forgive me and teach me a right knowledge. So I think no one can as patient as more than my mother.

The next people important to me is my father, he is my important people in my childhood, who can play many activities with me such as playing football or basketball.

One day, I was made fun by some people in school. After father had known this case, he did justice to me. And the teachers teach these people a lesson in the final, so I think father is very important.

The end of the people important to me is my brother, because parents and I might have a generation gap, therefore, my brother can talk with me so easily and we might not feel embarrassment here. And then, we are also a boy, and we will play a likely activity so I do not feel so lonely in my childhood and now.

Something people may think that our parents so trouble and not allow them to meddle your life. But I think our parents just aware you more than your standard, so we can’t take any gripe to our parents.

The above people are my important people to me, I think our parents are unique, no people can displace them. So I will treasure my parents more than everything, will you?

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Baggio

2008-10-04 10:13 pm

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The first person who is very important to me is my mother, because she really takes care of me so well. For example, if I am sick, she will take a day off just to look after (no for) me. And then, when (no the) examination comes, she will accompany me to revise. Finally, whenever I do something wrong, my mother always forgives me and teaches me the correct method. So I think no one can be as patient as (no need to use “more than” because no one can be as patient as” already has the meaning that your mother is the most patient) my mother.

The next important person to me is my father. He is very important to me from my childhood because he will play many games with me such as playing football or basketball.

One day, I was made fun by some people in the school. After my father knew that, he brought back justice to me by talking to my teacher. At the end the teacher gave these people a lesson. So I think my father is very important to me.

The last person who is important to me is my brother. Since parents and I may have (no a) generation gap, therefore (no ,) my brother can talk with me (no so) easily and we will not feel embarrassed with each other. Also we are both boys, and we can play similar activities, so I do not feel (no so) lonely in my childhood and now.

Some people may think that (no our) parents are so troublesome and do not want allow them to meddle in their life. But I think our parents are just care about us (no “more than your standard”), so we should not make any gripe to our parents.

All above (no people) are (no my) important people to me, I think our parents are unique, no people can displace them. So I will treasure my parents more than everything, will you?

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