英文翻譯(英文高手請進)10分!!!

I do not think the students should do the engineering in summer vacation time. Because the students are still during the course of studying . If they make after the worker , they heavy chance influence the study very summer vacation time, and also the opportunity of the study progress that students run into on summer vacation. So, they want to make the best of time to review carefully in the heat . In a word, I do not think the students do the engineering in summer vacation time .

中:
我認為學生們不應該做暑期工。因為學生們還在學習階段。如果他們做了暑期工後，他們很大機會影響了學業，而且暑假亦是學生們趕上學業進度的時機。因此，他們要在暑們裡好好善用時間來溫習。總括而言，我不認為學生們做暑期工。
英:
I thought the students should not make the summer labor. Because of
students also in study stage. If after they have made the summer
labor, their very big opportunity has affected the studies, moreover
the summer vacation also is the students catches up with the studies
progress the opportunity. Therefore, they must in friendly come the
review well in the hot weather with the time. In summary, I did not
think the students make the summer labor.

2008-10-04 14:54:42 補充：
其實我唔係真係五年級，係中5

In my opinion, students are not encouraged to do summer jobs. It is because students should make best use of time in studying. If they spend time in summer job will affect their academic result. During summer vacation, they should revise their lesson to improve themselves. To conclude, I won't support students to find summer job.

I think that/In my opinion, students should not take summer jobs. For they are still in the studying stage. After they take the summer jobs, they will probably affect their studies. Also, summer holiday is the greatest time for the students to follow up the path of their studies. Therefore, they have to use their summer time wisely to revise for their studies. Afterall, I do not agree students doing summer-time job

modifed from answer 002. Other answers contain too many grammatical errors. Here is one polished example:


I think that students should not do summer job. It is because they are still in the learning stage. If they do summer job, their studies will most likely be affected. Moreover, summer is a good time for students to catch up their studying progress. Therefore, they should use summer time to study. In short, I do not agree that students should do summer jobs.

I thought the students should not make the summer labor. Because of
students also in study stage. If after they have made the summer
labor, their very big opportunity has affected the studies, moreover
the summer vacation also is the students catches up with the studies
progress the opportunity. Therefore, they must in friendly come the
review well in the hot weather with the time. In summary, I did not
think the students make the summer labor.

I thought that the students should not make summer the labor. Because of students also in learning phase. If after they have made the summer labor, their very big opportunity has affected the studies, moreover the summer vacation is also the students catches up with the studies progress the opportunity. Therefore, they must make good use of the time in the hot weather to come the review well. In summary, I did not think that the students make summer the labor.


其實我唔係真係五年級，係中3

I consider students should not take summer jobs. As they are still under the stage of learning, most probably they will be affected in academic study after engaging in summer jobs. In fact, summer vacation should be a gold opportunity for students to pick up the progress in academic learning. As such, they should take their time for studying during the summer holidays. As a conclusion, I don't think that students should participate in summer jobs.

照文直譯:

From my opinion, students should not do summer job. It's because they are in studying stage, if they do summer job, their studies most likely be affected. Moreover, summer is a good time for students to catch up studying progress. Therefore, they should use their summer to study. In short, I do not agree students doing summer jobs.

I do not think the students should do the engineering in summer vacation time. Because the students are still during the course of studying . If after they do the engineering in summer vacation time, their very great chance has influenced the study, and also the opportunity of the study progress that students run into on summer vacation. So, they want to make the best of time to review carefully in the heat . In a word, I do not think that the students do the engineering in summer vacation time .