幫我改啦 英文句子 thx

You have got correct some good sentences. But there are a few mistakes in the others. Some are just careless spelling mistakes. The others are worth learning.
Mistakes are in ( ), corrections/additions are between - -.

1. I can't stand for a long time.

2. I can't stand the terrible things.

3. I can't stand my -very naughty brother- (bother very naughty).

4. I can't swim or bike.

5. I just hate people telling lies to me.

6. I can't stand being in a very -noisy- (noise) place.

7. I'm looking forward to -celebrate- my 18 years old birthday.

8. I can't -read books- (reading looks) for a long time.

9. I just hate animals.

10. I can't -sing-(song) and dance.

11. I like eating -sweets-(sweet).

12. I'm looking -forward-(foreard) to -meeting a- beautiful woman.

13. I just hate -tomatoes- (tomotos) and tuna (fish).

14. I can't study Maths.

15. I can't stand -to play- (in playing) when I have -morning- (moring) assembly for long time.

16. I'm looking forward to -attending- Ms Sze's lesson and -having- my -camera- (a carmera).

17 This is a lovely cockroach.

[THESE ARE 100% OK :-)]

1. I can't stand for a long time.
4. I can't swim or bike.
5. I just hate people telling lies to me.
9. I just hate animals.
14. I can't study Maths.
17 This is a lovely cockroach.

[THESE ARE ALMOST OK ;-) ]

2. I can't stand the [=> these / such] terrible things.
[Or: I can’t stand terrible things / I can't stand the terrible things he says…]

6. I can't stand being in a very noise [=> noisy] place.

7. I'm looking forward to my 18 years old [=> 18th] birthday.

3. I can't stand my bother very naughty [=> very naughty brother].

10. I can't song [=> sing] and dance. [Better: ‘I can’t sing OR dance.’]

11. I like eating sweet [=>sweets].

13. I just hate tomotos [=> tomatoes] and tuna fish.
['Tuna fish' is also acceptable (Cambridge Dictionary); in English: tuna = tuna fish / German: Tunfisch ;-)]

[THESE ARE NOT SO GOOD ;-( ]

8. I can't reading [=> read] looks [=> books] for a long time.
[Better: ‘I can’t do too much reading. / ‘I can’t read long.’]
[Normally, reading = reading books, & long = for a long time]

12. I'm looking foreard [=> forward] to [ meeting a / this / that] beautiful woman.

15. I can't stand in playing when I have moring [=> morning] assembly for long time.
[Sorry, can't fix this one. :-( The meaning of this sentence is not very clear. Do you mean the following?]
=> The morning assembly is long. We have to stand and we can’t play.
[If you are not the only one standing, better use ‘we’.]

16. I'm looking forward to Ms Sze's lesson and my a carmera.
=> I’m looking forward to attending Ms Sze’s lesson and buying a camera.
[You look forward to something / doing something.]
[Can also do without ‘attending’ but here, better with, for the sake of balance.]

1. I can't stand for a long time.

2. I can't accept those terrible things.

3. I can't tolerate my bother of being very naughty.

4. I can't swim or bike.

5. I just hate people telling lies to me.

6. I hate being in a very noisy place.

7. I'm looking forward to my 18 years old birthday.

8. I haven't read books for a long time.

9. I hate animals.

10. I can't sing or dance.

11. I like eating sweets.

12. I'm longing for a beautiful woman.

13. I hate tomotos and tuna fish.

14. I hate studying Maths.

15. I can't stop playing when I am having moring assembly for long time.

16. I'm looking forward to attend Ms Sze's lesson and to have a carmera.

17 This is a lovely cockroach.