請幫我批改英文日記 thx!

This morning, I went to school and saw my friend in front of the school gates. As I went to school on time, I went to the playground and had a talk with my friend for a while.

During the lunch time, the weather was very great! I went back home after school then took a shower. Just after my elder sister came back, I suddenly heard my father and grandfather were arguing.

At night, the typhoon signal number eight is hoist. I wish that I will not need to go to school tomorrow.

沒有改動你本身既寫法下, 改了小小, 主要係句子之連貫性, tense 方面要留意: 如today 要寫present tense, tomorrow要寫future tense~ 睇下改左既板本會唔會好d? ^^

Hello, my suggested reply as below:

「 Today I went to school & saw my friend stood in front of the school gates. I went to school on time & went to the playground to have a talk with my friend for a while. At the lunch time, the weather was very great! I was back home after school and then took a shower. Suddenly I heard my father and grandfather had a argument when my elder sister came back. At night, typhoon signal number eight was to be hosted, so I hope there was no need going school tomorrow. 」


Thank you.....