A very short poem=]{即時要””10點}

請不要介意我改了第二句，因為有rhyming pattern的話，會是比較好。

Best Friend Apple

My best friend is Apple.
She was born in April.
She likes yellow maple.
She loves drawing angel.

She always helps the poor people
and that makes her looks beautiful.
Being cheerful, her principle.
Having her here, it's wonderful


Rhyming Pattern為：ＡＢＡＢ
第１句和第３句同韻；２和４亦是；
５和７同韻；６和８同韻。
音節：
第一段，每句６個音節。
第二段，每句８個音節。

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My best friend is Apple
She likes eating apples
She was born in April
She is living in Taipo
She goes to school by bicycle
She is lovely, don't you think so?

My best friend is Apple.
She likes eating apples.
She born on April.
She look like Animal.
She has two Nipple.