求英文作文(goodbye,crocodile!)(再見啦,鱷魚)10點

The Asian Financial Crisis occured in year 1997. The economy of
many countries in east asia were affected. Hong Kong, Taiwan, Korea,
Thailand, etc suffered from collapse of stock market and devalued currencies.

The HK government finally decided to interfere the stock market by
putting large amount of capital into the stock market in order to
prevent further drop of the Hang Seng Index. It was discovered that
such sudden collapse of stock market was contributed by some
foreign investors who had large amount of capital and stock shares in
their hands. Their main purpose is to fully control the stock market so as
to earn large amount of money within very short period of time.
They were called "crocodile(大鱷)" in the business world.
As we know, HK has been adopting a free and opened
economical system for so many years. The trading and investment
environment in HK enjoy high level of freedom. In this way,
economically, what those crocodiles did was TOTALLY legal.
However, morally(道德上), what they did was a kind of mean(卑鄙)
act which harmed the society.

After a few weeks of battle between the HK government and the "crocodile",
the HK government successfully defeated the "crocodile".
The stock market recovered back to normal condition
and the investment environment in HK returned to healthy condition.
We HK people had won the game and said "goodbye,crocodile！"

2008-09-21 18:55:56 補充：
Sorry! There may be some grammatical mistakes.

For the sentence "The stock market recovered back to normal condition",
I am NOT quite sure whether the word "recovered" should be followed
by the word "back" or not.

I think it is safer to use the sentence "The stock market recovered to normal condition".

2008-10-10 00:59:32 補充：
hfchan32003 :
Thanks for your opinion. Your comments and suggestions are very useful and constructive. I deeply appreciate that.

2008-10-10 01:01:28 補充：
Testing

整體的概念很有新意, 讓我俾少許文法上的意見:

http://tw.dictionary.yahoo.com/search?ei=UTF-8&p=resume
recover + something (noun) or recover from something (noun)
e.g.

- recovered.
- recovered your health/ your wallet/ yourself.
- recovered from a bad cold.

2008-10-02 11:19:37 補充：
Recover本身一個字已經係解「回復正常狀態」, 和 "back to normal condition" 意思重複了.

可以改寫成
- recovered.
- recovered from the crisis.
- went back/ returned to normal condition.

2008-10-02 11:36:53 補充：
另外

Crisis OCCURRED in year 1997
interfere WITH the stock market
HK has been adopting a free and OPEN economical system for so many years.