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2008-09-20 7:02 pm
Subject: Man and Woman
這是一個關於男和女的主題,對於男女之間的差異,我認為並不是指男女的生理結構,而是探討一些更為深入的事,例如:是男女的能力有什麼差異?為何男女有不同的喜好?
This is a topic about male and female, regarding differences between male and female’s, I think that is not decided by man and woman’s physiology. But that discusses some more thorough matters. For example: what differences between men and women’s ability have? Why do the men and women have different fondness?
一般男孩小時候所玩的,多是遊戲機、賽車等,都是一些具有技術性以及刺激性的玩意。在中國,多數父母比較重視男孩多於女孩。很多男孩從小就會被父母教導要堅強,不能哭。因此長大後,做成男仔的性格較內斂和理性,他們不容易表達自己的感情,除此之外,男孩一般都會認為自己是家庭的支柱。
The boys generally played in childhood. Mostly of game boy or race car etc. all has technical or excitation gadgets. In China, most parents attach so much importance to the boy more than the girl. Many boys will be taught by the parents that must be strong and don’t cry, when they were young. After therefore grows up, it makes the male rational disposition. They are not easy to express their emotion. In addition, most men think they are the chief support of the family.
一般來說,女孩小時候都愛玩角色扮演、玩偶等遊戲,這都是沒有攻擊性的活動。多數父母從小就會很保護教女兒。因此長大後,做成女孩的性格較感性,經常表達自己的情感。除此之外,多數女孩會覺得她是弱者,需要被關心。
Generally speaking, the girls all liked playing the roll play game and dolls, all of these activities were not dynamic and attack. Most parents since the childhood protect a daughter very much. After therefore grows up, it makes the female perceptual disposition, they usually express their emotion. In addition, most women will think that they will be the weak one, need to be concerned.

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2008-09-20 10:28 pm
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This topic is a controversy of difference between males and females. We should not make assumptions and decide by their pysical appearance, but by a more thorough matters. For example, "what are the differences between men and women's ability?" Or, "Why do men and women have different interest?". There are many factors that we can use to distinguish the difference between the two.

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As for boys, they generally played with game-boys or race cars in their childhood years, all involves techniques and competitions excitments. In my native country, China, parent tends to favor the boy more over the girls, attension will reasonably also be more toward the boys. Parent implant the boys with acknowledgement that they are not to cry and moan easily ever since they were still young. As a result, boys turned rational disposition as they grow up, and it is not easy for them to express their emotion. Furthermore, this cause most men to think they are the leader, the chief of their family.

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As for girls, their playmate in their childhoods are mostly role playings, or dolls, things that does not involve dynamics or harmful potentials. Many parent are being over protective to their daughters since their childhood, it technically made them perceptual disposition as they grow up. Exact opposite with the boys, girls are more likely able to express their emotion to other. However, due to the over protective as they were still young, many women, as grown ups, would still think they are the weaker one, and should be more gentle with.



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參考: me
2008-09-20 7:09 pm
This is a topic about male and female(shouldn't have -'s)

Generally speaking, the girls all liked playing the role (not roll)play game and dolls, all of these activities were not dynamic and attack.
參考: myself


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