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How are you? I am a student in Form 7 this year. I come from a family in a very bad financial situation. At the same time I am subject to a lot of pressure from the Advanced Level Examination and my responsiblity towards my family.
My father has just retired last year and my mother does not have a job. My old grandmother also depends on us. My older sister is the only one working.
Among the five sisters in the family, four of us are students studying for AL, AS or HKCE examinations this year.
At the end of each month, there is always the problem of insufficient money to pay our bills. Our livelihood depends a great deal on getting the CSSA benefits. It is extremely hard just to pay for the ongoing schooling expenses. We don't even have any money to purchase any reference books.
I hope that you will approve this grant to me. I shall use this grant sensibly to buy reference books for myself and my younger sister. Hopefully our studies can be helped and at the same time the financial burden in the family can be relieved.
I am truly very grateful for your help.

You good, my this year is center seven students, in the family the
economic environment is very bad, simultaneously fully suffers the
college entrance examination and the family responsibilities pressure.
The daddy just retired in the lunar new year, mother has not worked,
but also some advanced age grandmother, only had an elder sister elder
sister person to work. But in the family in five sisters, including
four sisters is a student, we all are graduate the college entrance
examination and meet the examinee. Whenever in the end of the month
can have the wealth red problem. The day only could depend on receives
the public aid for to live, deals with the school daily expenditure
already extremely to be strenuous, bought reference book the fund also
not to have. Hoped you may approve this fund to give me, me can buy me
well using the fund with younger sister's reference book, hoped can
obtain the help in the study, simultaneously also can lighten in
family's burden. Really very much thank your help.

Hello,i this year is in seven students,in very poor economic environment,at the same time suffering from advanced level examination pressure and families。Father gotta just retirement,mother is not working,there is also a year - old grandmother,only sister a working。And five sister in,where there are four sister is students,we are all fresh Hong Kong and will be candidates。Each to the NLDFS family in the fiscal deficit problem。Days can only rely on CSSA recipients living,cover daily expenses has been very difficult,even buy books of the money is not。I hope that you may be granted this amount of money to i, i will make good use of funds to buy my sister's books,hope to learn on get help,also be able to alleviate their burden。Really thank you for help。

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You good, my this year is center seven students, in the family the
economic environment is very bad, simultaneously fully suffers the
college entrance examination and the family responsibilities pressure.
The daddy just retired in the lunar new year, mother has not worked,
but also some advanced age grandmother, only had an elder sister elder
sister person to work. But in the family in five sisters, including
four sisters is a student, we all are graduate the college entrance
examination and meet the examinee. Whenever in the end of the month
can have the wealth red problem. The day only could depend on receives
the public aid for to live, deals with the school daily expenditure
already extremely to be strenuous, bought reference book the fund also
not to have. Hoped you may approve this fund to give me, me can buy me
well using the fund with younger sister's reference book, hoped can
obtain the help in the study, simultaneously also can lighten in
family's burden. Really very much thank your help.

You good, my this year is center seven students, in the family the
economic environment is very bad, simultaneously fully suffers the
college entrance examination and the family responsibilities pressure.
The daddy just retired in the lunar new year, mother has not worked,
but also some advanced age grandmother, only had an elder sister elder
sister person to work. But in the family in five sisters, including
four sisters is a student, we all are graduate the college entrance
examination and meet the examinee. Whenever in the end of the month
can have the wealth red problem. The day only could depend on receives
the public aid for to live, deals with the school daily expenditure
already extremely to be strenuous, bought reference book the fund also
not to have. Hoped you may approve this fund to give me, me can buy me
well using the fund with younger sister's reference book, hoped can
obtain the help in the study, simultaneously also can lighten in
family's burden. Really very much thank your help.

2008-09-20 10:50:36 補充：
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