幫我睇睇下面首詩O5OK?比少少評語!!(超急)10點

2008-09-15 3:22 am
My parents

My mother cooks so tasty.
My father is sporty.
They are so helpful.
I think they are wonderful.

回答 (2)

2008-09-15 3:48 am
好渣!文法唔通
讀起來又冇韻味
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咁講唔會hurt 到你吖嘛!
2008-09-15 3:48 am
好似simple左少少和,你老師要求高唔高咖?你幾多年級?


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