I have worked for a company ,which trades skin care product since
I graduated.
For my working schedule, I need to due with various females
who were the manageress of beauty salon.
I have a special feeling that some clients are very eager to talk with me,
but they do not concern my selling skill or product knowledge.
They just want to talk with a male in their office hour.
I haven't gotten a good result in my HKCEE Examination
special in english subject.I have a idea that there are no need
to improve other subjects except language of english.
Hong Kong is a international city,english will be a useful tool
to communicate with foreign people. Furthermore,some e-mails or
reports are written by english. Yahoo knowledge provide a good
platform for me to improve my writting skill.
I need to say "thanks " to all of you, who have amended my message before.
Is there any grammatic mistakes? Please check for me, Thanks.
Grammar Checking
2008-09-14 9:04 pm
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2008-09-15 3:18 am
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I have worked for a company,which (sells) (skincare) (products), since I graduated.(In) my (everyday) (routine), I need to (deal) with various females
who (are) the manageress of beauty (salons).
I have a special feeling that some clients are (only) eager to talk with me,
but they do not (care about) my selling (points) (nor the products' information).
They just want to talk with a male in their office (hours).
I (didn't get) a good result in my HKCEE, (especially) in English subjects.
(So, that's why) I (think) there (is) no need
to improve (the) other subjects except (the English Language) .
Hong Kong is (an) international city, English (is definitely) a useful tool
to communicate with foreign people. Furthermore, some e-mails (and)
reports are written (in) English. (Yahoo! Knowledge+) (provides) a good
platform for me to improve my (writing) skill.
I need to say "thanks" to all of you, who have amended my message.
**Words in brackets are my amendments.**
2008-09-14 19:19:52 補充：
feel free to send me an email if you wanna know the reasons behind the amendments.
2016-09-18 5:33 am
Dear Nick
My name was Brian and I am wanting to introduced you to my company Modern Terminals Limited (MTL).
MTL is the first container port in Hong Kong and is set up in 1972. At that time we are employing nearly 300 workers in our T125 Kwai Chung Terminal and our throughput is around 3 million per year.
By 1992, as Hong Kong exports increased so does our business. The number of staff increases to 3,000 and we are expanding our terminal to T9 Tsing Yi. Our throughput increase to 4.5 million per year.
In 2008, we buy a container port in mainland China at DaChan Bay. MTL has nearly 1,000 workers there and the annual capacity is around 5 million.
2014 sees MTL handle its 1 billionth container since we open 42 years earlier, this is a significant milestone in our business.
Since then in order to reduce our costs, we decrease the number of staff to 800 and we contract 1,000 workers to work in our terminals. But as the business environment got better better, we have expected the number of staff will be increased to 1,300 in 2017.
I am hoping this provides a little background to MTL.
My name was Brian and I am wanting to introduced you to my company Modern Terminals Limited (MTL).
MTL is the first container port in Hong Kong and is set up in 1972. At that time we are employing nearly 300 workers in our T125 Kwai Chung Terminal and our throughput is around 3 million per year.
By 1992, as Hong Kong exports increased so does our business. The number of staff increases to 3,000 and we are expanding our terminal to T9 Tsing Yi. Our throughput increase to 4.5 million per year.
In 2008, we buy a container port in mainland China at DaChan Bay. MTL has nearly 1,000 workers there and the annual capacity is around 5 million.
2014 sees MTL handle its 1 billionth container since we open 42 years earlier, this is a significant milestone in our business.
Since then in order to reduce our costs, we decrease the number of staff to 800 and we contract 1,000 workers to work in our terminals. But as the business environment got better better, we have expected the number of staff will be increased to 1,300 in 2017.
I am hoping this provides a little background to MTL.
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