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My room is a cozy room. ==> 一句有兩個room字有d duplicate，可以用cozy one，不過你咁用都唔係唔得

There is a big wood bed in my room. ==> wooden

There is a bedside cupboard next to the bed. ==> bedside已經代表next to the bed，可以唔要bedside

is a bedside cupboard next to the bed. There is a clock and several photos on the bedside cupboard. ==> 好重複，可以簡單d話 Also, there is a bedside cupboard with a clock and several photos on it.

Opposite the bed ==> Opposite to the bed

There is a bright lamp on front of the bookcase. ==> in front of

There is a wood dressing table ==> wooden

Beside the bookcase, there is an old little cabinet next to the bookcase. ==> Beside = next to，呢句重複左

There is的確用得太多，可以嘗試將d有關既野link埋一齊，另外，可以嘗試就咁用個名詞開始。

I love my cozy room無問題，亦可以用This is my lovely cozy room.

Sure, it is a problem to use 'there is' too many times. I will not re-write your passage but instead will give some suggestions on how to modify it. You can use more conjunctions, prepositions, and sometimes watch the room from different angels. For instance,

'There is a big wood bed in my room. There is a bedside cupboard next to the bed. ' can be written like' There is a big wood bed with a bedside cupboard next to it.' ........

'There is a pop singer poster above the bedside cupboard and a wardrobe beside it. ' can be written as 'When you stand at the door/window side (or lying on the bed), a pop singer poster will come to your eye, with it hanging over the bedside cupboard and a wardrobe besides it.'

Sometimes, simply not using 'there is'. for example,
'There is a desk between the bookcase and the dressing table. ' can be written as:
'Between the bookcase and the dressing table, a desk is inserted for preparing my assignments/homework, it accompanies me for many nights.'

Think in this way, you can use lesser 'there is'.

Hope this can help. Try to re-write it yourself in that way.

My room is a cozy room. There is a big wooded bed in my room and a bedside cupboard next to my bed. There is a clock and several photos on the bedside cupboard. A pop singer poster above the bedside cupboard and a wardrobe beside it.
In my room, here is a pink rug on the floor. Opposite the bed, i put some little green bookcase there. A lot of funny story books in the bookcase. There is a bright lamp in front of the bookcase and a wooded dressing table. Also i put a painting flowers above the dressing table. There is a desk between the bookcase and the dressing table. My computer and some cote books on the desk and a wastebasket under the desk. And there is an old little cabinet next to the bookcase and a blue case on the cabinet and cone yellow flowers in the case. In the above of the cabinet there is a shelf . My sister buy me a radio and i put on the shelf. I love my cozy room.
the ending is very good with using " i love my cozy room "

2008-09-14 14:57:38 補充：
wooden bed 才對
不是 wood 或 wooded