(急）eglish writing

To:Young Post
I don't agree that clever is more important than beauty or handsome.It's because of five reasons.First of all,mostly people look at the way they look.If you are not beauty or handsome,no one will want to play with you.For instance,if you are too ugly,no one would wants to be your friend.With no friends in your life,you will be lonely.Secondly,with an ugly face,no one likes you.For example,you like a boy/girl.Eventhough you are being her/his girlfriend or boyfriend,their friend will just say "Oh my god,why would you choose an ugly girl/boy to be your girlfriend/boyfriend?."By that time,you will be so embarrass and you don't know what to do.Third,maybe in school,your teacher will discriminate you.And that makes you feel bad and sad.Your classmates laughing at you,and saying the word "Ugly" to you.Fourth,maybe your parents likes your brother or sister more than you and they don't really care about you.You will think you don't want to stay in this family no more.Also thinking you are not important at all in this world.Some people even will kill theirselfs.No one wants that to happen though.Fifth,eventhough you are in a rich family.You are dressing the most beautiful clothes in this world.Because of your face you makes yourself change.Maybe some people don't think this way.They thinks that they have money they could buy everyone's heart and they will be your friend.But that's not it,you have there body,you don't have their real heart.That is all the reasons I don't agree clever is more important than beautiful or handsome.


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