我想你地幫我作英文作文,,唔該

My best friend is Mary. She is very kind and cheerful. I know her in grade 4.
We used to play and study together. She has long hair and a blue glasses. She
is quite tall. I remember one day, I forgot to bring my lunch. She kindly share
some of her lunch with me and broght me a drink. The next day, she was sick
and didn't come to school. I wrote down what the teacher said and the
homework on a note. Then I take it to her house after school. After that,
we became good friend. Although she moved oversea to America last year,
we never forget each other. Even now, we still send e-mail to each other and chat.

不如試下比些 points 你參考啦!!
-Janet is my best friend who always cheer me up when I am sad.
- We used to played together durng recess.
- She is a good badminton player.
- I will never forget her for the rest of my life.

how many words you want to write? anything special you want to include? you want your friend be your best friend? a boy or a girl?