中譯英 + 美化

中譯英 + 美化

2008-09-09 10:46 pm

請美化+改善+翻譯以下文章

The first day he arrived here, he told himself he have to make friends as manay as possible. he, successed(強調是過去).

a year isnt that long

"Does anyone ever feel lonely even he is surrounded by many friends?" 他向著山裡大叫, 可是聽到的只是他自己的回音, 彷彿在嘲笑著他的孤獨. he used to hang out a lot with his people. 礙於交通不便 there is hang out no more(請美化)

i guess, is time for him to focus in his academic. if anyone see him struggling with his lonelyness, please tell him to focus on school(意指重新定位到學業上) it would help him feels better. on some level....somehow....

請美化+改善(特別是grammar)

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2008-09-13 11:55 pm

✔ 最佳答案

The first day he arrived here, he told himself he has to make lotsa friends, finally he made it!!

Afterall, a year isn't that long!!

"would anyone feel lonely even when he is surrounded with my friends??", facing at the mountain, there he shouted!! All he heard was the echo of his voice, seemed to him that the mountain was laughing at him. He used to hang out a lot with his friends. Due to the difficulties of transportation, he no longer hang out anymore.

I guess it's time for him to concerntrate on his academic. Should anyone sees him struggling with his lonelyness, please remind him to concertrate on him studies, this way it will make him feel better. To a certain extend.....somehow...........

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