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Hamster

There are two hamsters (at) my home two months ago.
These are the birthday present for me so I have (to be) old.


Hamsters are my favourite animals.
I want to teach them how to be models.


Though they do not have beautiful wing(s).
They can jump up and down like flying.

I like to play with them all the day.
They go toilet on my hand(s) (sometimes).


Every sundays, I usually read (with) them one of my classmate's story book.
One time they ask me 'Who is Rita Bok?'


Although they will be getting old someday(,)
I will treasure this moment with (them) as I may.

I don't think it is 100% correct.
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(Better to put 'My Hamster')Hamster

There are two hamsters on my home two months ago.
These are the birthday present for me so I have old.
(Sorry, I misunderstand your meaning)

Hamsters are my favourite animals.
I want to teach them how to be models.
(No need 'how')
(We use although, not though)
Though they do not have a beautiful wing.
They can jump up and down like flying.

I like to play with them all the day.
They go toilet on my hand someday.
(Hey! What is that?)

Every sundays,I usually read them one of my classmate's story book.
One time they ask me 'Who is Rita Bok?'
((Excuse me, this do not have any relation for 'My hamster')