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1.Kelvin fell completely in love with his dog.Before
2.he had been slowly to get up,but now he
3.was always up at6a.m.,feeding,brushing and making
4.care of Doraemon,his wonderful dog.He spend
5.hours playing with Doraemon,and prepared all
6.his food himself.Every evenings he took his
7.dog for a very long walk.He finded he made
8.friends with some other dog-owner.One,in
9.particularly,was a lovely girl
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2008-09-06 10:33 pm
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2008-09-06 11:37 pm
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1.Kelvin has fallen completely in love with his dog.Before2.he had been slow to get up,but now he
3.was always up at 6a.m.,feeding,brushing and taking
4.care of Doraemon, his wonderful dog. He spent
5.hours playing with Doraemon,and prepared all
6.his food himself.Every evening he took his
7.dog for a very long walk.He found he made
8.friends with some other dog-owners.One,in
9.particular,was a lovely girl
2008-09-06 10:42 pm
1.Kelvin falls completely in love with his dog.Before
2.he had been slowly to get up,but now he
3.was always getting up at 6a.m.,feeding,brushing and taking
4.care of Doraemon,his wonderful dog.He spend
5.hours playing with Doraemon,and prepared all
6.his food himself.Every evening he took his
7.dog for a very long walk.He found he made
8.friends with some other dog-owner.One,in
9.particularly,was a lovely girl
2.he had been slowly to get up,but now he
3.was always getting up at 6a.m.,feeding,brushing and taking
4.care of Doraemon,his wonderful dog.He spend
5.hours playing with Doraemon,and prepared all
6.his food himself.Every evening he took his
7.dog for a very long walk.He found he made
8.friends with some other dog-owner.One,in
9.particularly,was a lovely girl
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