Proofreading:如果5係識哂,寫1,2個都ok Thx
no lines has more than ONE mistake and some lines are correct
1.We've chosen a fairly
2.small dog and we think that now your 14
3.you are old enough to be responsible and put
4.the dog for plenty of walks and exerxises.We
5.suggest you to take it out twice a day,
6.once before and once after schol.And we except
7.you to clean up after it.You mustn't to make
8.the streets dirty for other peoples.
Proofreading(20點)
2008-09-06 9:43 pm
回答 (1)
2008-09-06 10:00 pm
✔ 最佳答案
We've chosen fairly small dog and we think now that you're 14 ,you are old enough to be responsible and have the dog to do plenty of walks and exercises. We suggest you to take it out twice a day, once before and after school. And we expect you to clean up after it. You mustn't make the streets dirty for other people.-there are many mistakes here
1. dont say PUT the dog
2. and we expect NOT except
3. you mustn't make NOT to make
4. NOT peoples, people
5. NOT your, YOURE
參考: im in year 8....iz obvious
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