can u improve this sentence?

2008-09-05 11:43 am
can u improve this sentence, so that it is suitable for an interview?

I am now actively looking for a marketing company to employ me as an trainee

回答 (3)

2008-09-05 7:03 pm
✔ 最佳答案
I am now actively looking for a marketing company to employ me as an trainee.
整句意思勉強達意, 但字眼上不太對. 我會這樣寫, 你看怎樣?
I am looking for a job anxiously as a marketing sales trainee.
註:
1) anxiously is a better word than actively.
2) you are looking for a job, not a company. 不要搞亂主體.
3) 提出你要求的post (marketing sales)便okay,不用提company.
純 own opinion, hope it's helpful.
參考: self
2008-09-05 4:14 pm
I am currently looking for some training in a marketing company.
參考: myself
2008-09-05 11:51 am
I am interested in an entry level position in a marketing company.


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