Proofreading

2008-09-05 6:20 am

Proofreading:如果5係識哂,寫1,2個都ok Thx
no lines has more than ONE mistake and some lines are correct.

1. Kelvin Lai was very surprised for his birthday
2.present.His parents gave a cute puppy for him.
3.He asked for one many times in the past,
4.but his father had always said it is too
5.troublesome,and not fare to the dog as there
6.wasn't much spaces.

回答 (1)

用戶233986

2008-09-05 8:35 pm

✔ 最佳答案

1. Kelvin Lai was very surprised (XforX)..... his birthday
2.present.His parents gave a cute puppy (XforX).... him.
3.He asked for (XoneX) many times in the past,
4.but his father had always said it (XisX)..... too
5.troublesome,and not (XfareX) to the dog as there
6.wasn't much spaces.

Line 1, 2 是preposition錯，請你嘗試填番另一個preposition
Line 3 刪除one，做埋比你
Line 4 錯tense，請你嘗試改
Line 5 錯adjective, 同音字 fxxx, 你試下做
Line 6 無錯

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