how will u improve the sentence?
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2008-09-04 7:00 pm
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I am writing about the topic in chemistry 句子己很達意, 如要修改, 我認為:
I am writing a few paragraphs about the topic of chemistry.
1) 其中最主要的是要用 of chemistry 而非 in chemistry.
2) some 是一修飾詞 (some paragraph 一些段落). a few 是定義詞 (a few paragraphs 數段, 幾段)
參考: self
2008-09-18 3:25 pm
你可以改成：I am writing an essay of chemistry.
意思即係：我想作一篇有關化學的文章。
正常係唔會用"some paragraph"，字面意思即係"寫幾段"，意思怪怪地。
"In chemistry"="在化學這科裹"，唔係咁啱。
意思即係：我想作一篇有關化學的文章。
正常係唔會用"some paragraph"，字面意思即係"寫幾段"，意思怪怪地。
"In chemistry"="在化學這科裹"，唔係咁啱。
2008-09-04 2:40 pm
I am writing some paragraphs (or an essay, rather) on/about (the) ____ (the topic within chemistry).
參考: me
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