幫我睇下以下grammar有咩錯.THX

Pat and Joe are both footballer錯.I aim錯 very respectful to Pat because of his spirit.In spite of his blindness he also laughing 錯when he talk 錯about football in the court.Unfortunate he was blined錯,wrose 錯still he will never play football again.Joe is rich and successful.However he was錯 discourteous that he teased錯 Pat in the court .He is impolite.

The following passage written in present tenses hopefully will be better grammatically. The original meaning of your passage is kept as close as possible.:

Pat and Joe are both footballers.I am very respectful to Pat because of his spirit.In spite of his blindness he always laughs when he talks about football in the court.Unfortunate he is blind and worse still he will never play football again.Joe is rich and successful.However he is discourteous that he has teased Pat in the court .He is impolite.

其實,,我唔係好明篇野講咩= =""
希望冇會錯你意思,,
我諗你下次都係打番中文出黎會好d

Pat and Joe are both footballer.I am very respectful to Pat because of his spirit.He always laughed when he was talking about football in the court.Unfortunately, he blined. It is very wrose that he will never play football again. Joe is rich and successful. But, he is discourteous that he teased Pat in the court .He is impolite.

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