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Our Olympics game
Do you feel upset about the Olympics' end?Come on,face the fact.Beijing Olympics was overred.but it brought us stun and shock.

Before 8/8/2008,an abundance of unpredictable events happened in china.Most of them were not good,like sichuan earthquake,the sturgeon was killed in hong kong aquarium,the threatening from Tibet.They all frustrated me.

Honestly,I don't really expect Beijing can hold such this weighty,prime magnificent activities.However,it surprised me that Beijing also can afford this Olympics and did a terrific work!

Director Chung showed the Chinese culture to world,he displayed an unprecedented china to the world.the great architecture,the fruitful performance and the legend athletes.Perfect!I totally appreciated the opening ceremony.I thought it must be boring at first.But that was extremely out of my expectation.Kindling the holy fire was one of the must see item.I love the way that the holy fire's conveyance.That was a magic.Incredible!

After the ceremony,Chinese athletes has done the classical work.We got 51 gold medals,it broke our gold medals record.As the saying goes: no pain no gain,we've been understood the truth in thousand years ago,so we deserved these medals and the honor.

Every time when I saw our athletes stood on the stage and share the happiness to the crowds,I felt so proud to be a Chinese.There's no doubt that we still have lots of improvements:Morality,the civil right etc,but I believe that china is getting better and becoming a country as strong as U.S,even stronger!

The Olympic proved the world that anything is possible.If you try,you'll get an opportunity to reach the success.Conversely,you'll get nothing and back to the start point.Now i can tell everyone and whoop that"I am a Chinese!!"I literally a Chinese-holic now =]
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