英文寫ESSAY一問

2008-09-02 2:27 am
本人在寫一本書的讀後感和評論,現遇到了一些語法問題。
在寫當我閱讀期間的感想時,我用了過去式,但我打算在同一段加上現在,即寫評論時的感想,是否應用回現在式?
請檢查一下下句有無語法錯誤:
I felt I became a role in your in your story
Nevertheless, the major factor makes me to admire your composition isn't the story at all.本句為寫作當時所發出之感想.

回答 (1)

2008-09-02 2:34 pm
✔ 最佳答案
I feel that I became one of the roles in your story. (You still feel that way even after you read the story. You will use "felt" if you no longer feeling that way.)

Nevertheless, the story is not what I admire; your composition is.


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