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2008-08-31 6:01 am
My Summer Holiday
My summer holiday was quite generally but in my point of view , I thought it was quite interesting .I like playing computer games and basketball the most so I spent almost all the times on this two things . Everyday I playing basketball with my friends .Why I often playing basketball? Because I wanted to join ILC basketball team .I hope I can join it …
My another hobbies is playing computer games. It is very interesting. I made many new friends by online played games. In the games , I could found sense of satisfaction and it could not found in actuality. This is what I like playing computer games reason.
Except this two things I did in summer holiday. The other thing was my homework. I thought it was hard for me but I could finish it.
That all of my summer holiday.
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2008-08-31 12:32 pm
My Summer Holiday
In my point of view my summer holiday was quite generally. I thought it was quite interesting .I like playing computer games and basketball the most, so I spent almost all the times on this two things . Everyday I play basketball with my friends .Why I often play basketball? Because I want to join ILC basketball team, and I hope I could join it …
My another hobby is play computer games. It is very interesting. I made many new friends by playing online games. By playing games , I could find a sense of satisfaction and it could not find in actuality. This is the reason why I like playing computer games.
Except these, I also did my homework in summer holiday . I thought it was hard for me, but finally I could finish it.
That all of my summer holidays.
2008-08-31 6:05 am
My Summer Holiday
My summer holiday was quite generally but in my point of view, I thought it was quite interesting .I like playing computer games and basketball the most so I spent almost all the times on these two things. Everyday I playing basketball with my friends .Why I often playing basketball? Because I wanted to join ILC basketball team .I hope I can join it …
My hobbies is playing computer games. It is very interesting. I made many new friends by online played games. In the games, I could found sense of satisfaction and it could not found in actuality. This is what I like playing computer games reason.
Except these two things I did in summer holiday. The other thing was my homework. I thought it was hard for me but I could finish it.
That all of my summer holiday.
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