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Based on the experience of Hanae Mori, I think that a good fashion designer must be a person of persistence (We do not use “insist” unless you make it a longer sentence like “ a person who will never give up if she believes her doing things in a right way. Since this will be too long and we can just use one word “persist” to present this idea, so we do not use “insist”.) Hanae Mori grew up in a traditional family. She often argued with her father about (after “about it should be “something”. This something can either be a noun or noun clause, while :she wanted to become a fashion designer is not a noun clause.)her ideal of becoming a fashion designer. I think that if she gave up at that time, she would not have such successful achievements. (let’s do not use “I think” anymore in this passage because we have been using it few times.) In my thinking a fashion designer must be studious. Hanae Mori knew that Coco Chanel is a successful businesswoman in the fashion area. She did not jealous of Coco . Instead, she asked Coco (we need to put the name here because we are talking about 2 woman and can be confusing of who is who) for advice about her designs. I think (no that) a successful fashion designer must be persistent and studious like Hanae Mori.