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Hubble Space Telescope surrounds Earth 100,000
(mingpaonews) on August 12 on Tuesday 11:35
Hubble ” the outer space telescope Monday completed has surrounded Earth's 100,000th the flight.
NASA reported that Monday in the morning, ground scientist excitedly testimony this “100,000th” time. In order to congratulate this time, the scientist will let “Hubble” the telescope in this in “the vision” aim in the Magellan nebula specially a spider nebula corner, under the record there star just was born the time brilliant scene.
The spider nebula locates the position to be apart from the Earth about 170,000 light years, is in the Milky Way peripheral region most active “makes the star” one of belts. The scientist guessed possibly is neighbor some supernova outburst initiates in the spider nebula “to make the star” the process.
“Hubble ”the telescope entered the outer space in April 24, 1990, more than ten years like one day the observation, has transmitted the innumerable precious pictures to the Earth, was considered that rewrites one of astronomy textbook most important outer space sights.
Because old, “Hubble” telescope's some important spare parts and scope already obviously senile. NASA had decided that in October sends the spaceman to ride the aerospace craft service “Hubble” the telescope, this will be the spaceman fifth time is also last time services it, the Space Agency will argue vigorously causes it to insist that revolves to 2013.

Grammatical errors are found here in the two pieces of translated composition. Such kind of work doesn't seem to be high recommended here as for the submission.

第一篇都譯得不太好.. but..
第二篇譯錯左都一齊錯!! 仲話冇抄人 !?
點解最尾果句用"argue"做main verb ? "argue" is the best verb for "力爭"嗎?
"the Space Agency will argue vigorously causes it to insist that revolves to 2013."

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Hubble Space Telescope surrounds Earth 100,000
(mingpaonews) on August 12 on Tuesday 11:35
Hubble ” the outer space telescope Monday completed has surrounded Earth's 100,000th the flight.
NASA reported that Monday in the morning, ground scientist excitedly testimony this “100,000th” time. In order to congratulate this time, the scientist will let “Hubble” the telescope in this in “the vision” aim in the Magellan nebula specially a spider nebula corner, under the record there star just was born the time brilliant scene.
The spider nebula locates the position to be apart from the Earth about 170,000 light years, is in the Milky Way peripheral region most active “makes the star” one of belts. The scientist guessed possibly is neighbor some supernova outburst initiates in the spider nebula “to make the star” the process.
“Hubble ”the telescope entered the outer space in April 24, 1990, more than ten years like one day the observation, has transmitted the innumerable precious pictures to the Earth, was considered that rewrites one of astronomy textbook most important outer space sights.
Because old, “Hubble” telescope's some important spare parts and scope already obviously senile. NASA had decided that in October sends the spaceman to ride the aerospace craft service “Hubble” the telescope, this will be the spaceman fifth time is also last time services it, the Space Agency will argue vigorously causes it to insist that revolves to 2013.


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Hubble Space Telescope surrounds Earth 100,000
(mingpaonews) on August 12 on Tuesday 11:35
Hubble ” the outer space telescope Monday completed has surrounded Earth's 100,000th the flight.
NASA reported that Monday in the morning, ground scientist excitedly testimony this “100,000th” time. In order to congratulate this time, the scientist will let “Hubble” the telescope in this in “the vision” aim in the Magellan nebula specially a spider nebula corner, under the record there star just was born the time brilliant scene.
The spider nebula locates the position to be apart from the Earth about 170,000 light years, is in the Milky Way peripheral region most active “makes the star” one of belts. The scientist guessed possibly is neighbor some supernova outburst initiates in the spider nebula “to make the star” the process.
“Hubble ”the telescope entered the outer space in April 24, 1990, more than ten years like one day the observation, has transmitted the innumerable precious pictures to the Earth, was considered that rewrites one of astronomy textbook most important outer space sights.
Because old, “Hubble” telescope's some important spare parts and scope already obviously senile. NASA had decided that in October sends the spaceman to ride the aerospace craft service “Hubble” the telescope, this will be the spaceman fifth time is also last time services it, the Space Agency will argue vigorously causes it to insist that revolves to 2013.