英文工作證明...可否替我檢查有沒有錯誤? 謝謝!!

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TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN
Dear Sir/Madam,
This is to certify that Mr. Chan XX, holder of Hong Kong Identity Card No.V11111(3), is employed by our company as a clerk and has been in that position for the period from 27th September 2007 to 31st May 2008.
During the period of his employment, he is responsible for the publishing of advertisement, production of name cards and handling contracts/documents.
He is leaving us of his own accord for pursuing his new study path and we wish him success in his future career.
Yours faithfully,
For and on behalf of
YY Company Ltd.
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TO WHOM IT MAY CONCERN

This is to certify that Mr. Chan XX (holder of Hong Kong Identity Card No.V11111(3)), was employed by YY Company Limited as a clerk for the period from 27th September 2007 to 31st May 2008.

His job duties in our Company are advertisement composing, production of name cards and contract documents.

As Mr. Chan XX is venturing into his new study path, he decided to resign from the Company.

We would like to take this opportunity to wish him success in his future endeavor.

Yours Faithfully,


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