下面架英文句子有咩錯

2008-08-25 6:26 am
下面架英文句子有咩錯,我睇唔出.
1.Use mobile phones in school causes many serious problems.
2.The picnic had been cancelled was very disappointing.
3.He announced in the meeting astonished me a great deal.

回答 (2)

2008-08-25 6:42 am
✔ 最佳答案
以上三句句子都有同一個錯誤.....就係於一句句子中,出現多過一個動詞.
就好似第一句 : USE 同 CAUSES 都係動詞
第二句 : HAD BEEN CANCELLED 同 WAS 都係動詞
第三句既 ANNOUNCED 同 ASTONISHED.
想更正的話可以將句子分成兩句或在兩個動詞中間加上connectives 如which , that......
參考: ME
2008-08-25 6:46 am
1.Use mobile phones in school causes many serious problems.
2.The picnic had been cancelled was very disappointing.
3.He announced in the meeting astonished me a great deal.

1. USING mobile phones in school WILL CAUSE many serious problems.

2. The picnic THAT had been cancelled was very disappointing.

3. HIS ANNOUNCEMENT in the meeting astonished me a great deal.

Mmm... don't ask me why
I'm not good at explaining,
I'm still too young to know,
Yeah, just makes sense.


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