更正英文錯誤&GRAMMAR

Q: ‘Life is short. My idea is that if l want to do something, l will do it'. Do you agree with what Madonna said?

A: I agree with Madonna. Life is as fast as a rocket. It fleets (life fleets, a person cannot fleet, so we have to change “l” to “It” as pronoun for “life”) away quickly. (For the following sentences we have to add some adjective to correspond to your basic idea : life fleets. Without the adjectives you are just describing the life process plainly.) After you were born, you grow up so fast to become a kindergarten student. When you are a teenager, you grow up fast to be an undergraduate. Then you get married, and all of a sudden you will become a father or mother. Therefore, life is running too fast. If we have anything that we (“If we have anything” is one clause, “want to do” is another clause, so we need a conjunction “that” to link them together. Then please do not forget the subject “we” for the phrase “want to do”) want to do, we must try our best to achieve it. Even if we can't, we have no regret. To sum up, life is short. If you want to do something, you must do that now!

Q:'Life is short.My idea is that if l want to do something, l will do it now'.Do you agree with what Madonna said?

A: l agree with what Madonna said.Life is such as a racket.l fleets away quickly.When you were a baby,you grow up to become a kindergarden student.When you are a teenage,you grow up as a undergraduate.When you married,you will become a child's mother/father.Therefore,life is too fast.If we have anything we want to do,we must try our best to achieve it.Even if we can't,we will have no regrets.To sum up,life is short,if you want to do something,you must do it now!!!.