改善英文行動 64. 希望大家盡力幫忙

happy

2008-08-22 3:16 am

希望大家盡力指出我錯處
狠心批改,不必留情.
並且希望說明錯的原因
感謝

Buying books story.

Today, my friends and I went to Mong Kok for buying textbooks. While we were going to the ABC book shop, there were a lot of teenagers who worked at other book shops stopped us and told us they could sell many cheap textbooks to us.

However, we continued to head the ABC book shop because textbooks in there has a promise to people. After buying books, we returned home respectively. I remembered that it has a bus which can go to my home quickly, but I forgot the number of the bus. Unfortunately, I needed by MTR and then walked to my home. How heavy the books are!!!!

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2008-08-22 6:41 am

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Buying books story.

Today, my friends and I went to Mongkok TO buy some textbooks. ON OUR WAY HEADING TOWARDS the ABC bookshop, WE WERE BLOCKED BY MANY TEENAGERS WORKING FOR OTHER BOOKSHOPS CLAIMING THEY HAVE MANY CHEAP TEXTBOOKS.

However, we continued to head TOWARDS the ABC bookshop because textbooks in there (What do you mean by "has a promise to people"? i am guessing you mean the quality is good) ARE RELIABLE IN QUALITY. After buying books, we ALL WENT HOME. I VAGUELY remembered THERE IS a bus which GOES to my home quickly, but I forgot WHAT NUMBER IT IS. THEREFORE, I WENT by THE MTR and then walked home. How heavy the books WERE!!!!

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