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improve your own essay,
otherwise its not yours is it

Read books with phrases you do not most often use and feature a dictionary neighborhood for phrases you do not know, write them down and revise them. Sounding out overseas phrases may also be tough with phrases like ideosyncratic so recollect if a phrase is unusual "y" makes a "i" sound and "e" on the finish makes vowel sounds lengthy and "ain" makes an ane sound. Thats only a elementary advisor, I understand there are books that support you to sound out phrases to spell or vice versa.

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