You can send the revision to my email, which is
[email protected]
Here is my essay below.
http://www.badongo.com/file/10956671
Thank you so much!!!
更新1:
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Can someone help me to revise and improve my English essay please!!!?
2008-08-20 1:15 am
Is there someone can help me to revise and improve my English essay please?
You can send the revision to my email, which is
[email protected]
Here is my essay below.
http://www.badongo.com/file/10956671
Thank you so much!!!
You can send the revision to my email, which is
[email protected]
Here is my essay below.
http://www.badongo.com/file/10956671
Thank you so much!!!
回答 (2)
2008-08-20 1:31 am
✔ 最佳答案
dudeyour mla format is awful
you merely summerize the story
and your concrete deatils need work
you ask questions
using the words I and Me
the essay is supposed to be formal
using those words is a no no
ok?
Besos
Erica
參考: I add more later
2008-08-20 1:21 am
I cannot see the essay,it says I have to download something.
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