(超簡單) 英文自我介紹批改

2008-08-15 11:43 pm

請重新把正確的寫法全部打出.

修改當中文法, 錯字, 以及外國人不會這樣說的地方, 把中文改成英文.

Self introduction
I graduated at XX university in XX. XX is my major. XX is my 輔修. I took part in a competition of business, and I 入圍. English and Chinese, I can speak, writ, listen and read them as well as 廣東話. Using computer? Completely on problem. I know flash, photoshop, phythen, webdide designing, and some basic computer things. I notice the Macao news, Hong Knog news and Taiwan news everyday, read finance, economic magazine and information of Macao economic every week, and read some books about business, when I was free.

In university, i do my best everyday, so you can see my score made good progress. I also take part in the Hong Kong classmate club to be a cadre of them. I was a secretary in there. And the other hand, I also found some part time job there .

I am entertained at stock, XX, 行銷, and創業. I am conscientious and never give up. I always make a plan when I do some important things.

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CPL

2008-08-16 12:15 am

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I graduated from XX university in XX, majoring XX and minoring XX.

I entered in a competition of business, and forunately got into the final.

I mastered English, Chinese and Cantonese. Also, I am quite experienced in using computer programs of different kind, like Macromedia(R) Flash, Adobe(R) Photoshop, phythen(<--??). Furthermore, I am pleased to know some about webpage design.

During my leisure time, I love to read articles and news of a wide variety. Excluding local news, Macao and Taiwan news are also one part of my concern. Another part of it is the finance, economy and business books and news.

At university, I tried my best doing well in academic performance. I did also was a secretary of Hong Kong classmate club to be a cadre of them. Apart from that, I always did some part-time job for experience when I was free through the Club.

I am entertained at stock, XX, 行銷, and創業. I am also conscientious and persistent. Also, I always set up a plan before doing anything important, perhaps that is one of my good points.

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