英文日記 ,急急急!!!

The dewdrops were glinting in the sunlight , but I didn't dash into the garden as usual because I felt off-colour this morning . My mum was so worried
that she said that I should stay in bed all day , adding that we would go to
hospital a while later . After I accompanied with my mum had arrived at
there , I had my temperature checked . The result was that I had a fever .
Before going back home , I was given some medicine which I had to
take for three days continually . I told my mum that if I recharged my
batteries , I would be as fit as a fiddle the following day , asking for a bowl
of congee that would made me feel as right as rain .
I have now realized that I must take care of myself . Otherwise ,
mum will be so sad if she sees me being ill again . Plus , I promised that I
would eat an apple every day . You know , an apple is good for us , isn't
it ?

2008-08-13 19:56:19 補充：
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2008-08-14 16:31:29 補充：
yppah123 ( 小學級 3 級 ) 的 tense 不是全對！！

Wednesday, August 13, 2008
I get up at 8 o’clock this morning as usual even though I am now on summer holiday,
I had a quick shower because it is very hot. I am doing my usual routine after having breakfast, first I watch the morning news on TV, second I read a few chapters of my favourite novel, and the last I do some homework. Everything is going well without any exception.
I feel a bit tired at noon time. It is very unusual and I am asking myself what is going on, am I sick? Not more than 20 minutes later, my body is aching and start to shaking all over uncontrollably, big drops of sweats are rolling down from my forehead. Oh, I am all by myself at home, my parents are at work. I can hardly stand up, I crawl to the coffee table where my cell phone is sitting, I reach it but the battery is low and I don’t know where the charger is, what a coincidence! At that moment the door bell is ringing, I call out with my full strength “ be there in a minute”… I find myself in the hospital bed later that evening. It was the postman calling “999” for help! (212 words)