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[匿名]

2008-08-13 10:37 am

以下係之前我course leader 一個月前回覆既一段字 (節錄)
而家過左一個月我再想問下/提點下佢關於呢件事

As you may know, I have keep asking the college about the D2/HD3 transfer policy this year, and the latest response (yesterday) is that we can do that internally in our course...
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...I will check and have the application form prepared. If there is any vacancy opened, I will surely inform students of the opportunity. But up till now, there is no guarantee of a seat yet. Please Be patient.
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以下係我打算send比佢既內容
請檢查一下因為我覺得好似冇乜禮貌

Dear Peter,
This is Tom again. *Does it still have no news about the D2/HD3 transferability from the college? I'm just tried to keep asking. Thank you!

我想係*果度加插一句 "又過左一個月了"應該點寫好...同埋應唔應該加好 =.="

請大大幫幫忙比比意見點寫好我驚比人話我冇禮貌...
thx

回答 (1)

Baggio

2008-08-13 11:46 am

✔ 最佳答案

Hi, please see if the following is suitable for you or not :

Dear Peter, (Please change to Mr. Peter XX, because this is still a kind of formal email. May be you are very familiar with him, you still cannot call him Peter in a formal email)

This is Tom XXX (Your surname). I am so sorry to disturb you again but I am really eager to know the result of the vacancy availability. It has been more than one month since our last communication, I am wondering whether you will have some favourable news for my application.
Does the College still have no news about the D2/HD3 transferability yet? I am sorry to keep asking but I am sure you understand my concern.
Thank you for your time in attending this matter for me!
With Sincerity,
_________
Tom

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