急急急!!!!a picnic by the sea

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A picnic the sea

首先,講 I 或一個人名(我會用I)提議去海邊野餐(除'提議'外,可以用其他方法引入正文)。然後話We用一種方法去海邊。接著描寫風景有多麼迷人。跟著, 講We忍唔著去跳入水。游完就係樹下(記著, 講We見到樹下唔錯)食。最後(我給你), Dad(or friend's name) said that the place's wonderful and wanted to come here again.

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2008-08-12 23:45:59 補充：
Sample:

It was sunny today with cool winds, and Dad suggested to go to a picnic. Everyone agreed. So off we go to the seaside near Tom's home(Tom is my friend). When we arrived, May(my younger sister) changed into her swimsuit and jumped into the water...

2008-08-13 09:24:08 補充：
...into the water quickly. Dad chased after her to ensure her safety. Splash! We heard the sound of Dad and May jumping into the water. Mum and I then found a cool spot under the coconut tree and we sat down to take out all the food. I looked around. The sun was shining brightly in

2008-08-13 09:24:16 補充：
the sky and made my eyes close when I looked up. The yellow sand shimmered in the sun. I went .to the sand with bare feet and the sand scorched my feet. Then, Mum threw my slippers to me. And I wore it quickly. I can find many shells around me. Sooner enough, when May and

2008-08-13 09:24:30 補充：
Dad just came out of the water, I ran to Mum with a handful of shells. We ate sandwiches, chicken wings, coke and more. May asked for an apple after that and Mum shook her head. I

2008-08-13 09:24:36 補充：
peered into the picnic basket. There's an apple and a banana! Then I understood. Mum wanted May to stop crying. May saw the apple and yelled. Mum didn't say anything. Dad said that it's a great place so he took a picture of it. At last, we went home at sunset

A picnic by the sea

On a certain Sunday, our whole family decided to go to the beach for a swim. When we arrived, we first scanned the fine, white sand for any iridescent shells. At noon, I sat under the sun and ate some lunch. It was tuna, peanut butter, prawn and mayonnaise sandwiches. Delicious! Then we ran into the refreshingly cold water to play with a enormous beachball. After a while, I felt a little tired, so I came to a nearby willow tree for some shade and rest. In the evening, in the air of the dusk, the setting sun, I left the beach. It was such a fun and wonderful day.