how can i write the sentence in english?

2008-08-12 2:51 am
IMSAS部門, 在08年, 第一次, 公佈一些科目的最高分學生名字, 在我修了的學科內有四科公佈了最高分學生名字, 而我是數學,物理和化學的最高分學生.

The IMSAS department first notified the name of the top student in some modulus in 2008, whereas I was the top student in modulus mathematics, physics and chemistry, which were three out of the four notified modulus that I took.

***i put my first drift of the translation in here, can u try to correct it?

回答 (3)

2008-08-21 7:22 am
✔ 最佳答案
This year, 2008 (Change it to "Year 2008 is the...." in your resume for next year), is the first year the IMSAS Department (I strongly suggest you use the full name of IMSAS for various reasons; 1. you are not supposed to use any short form in a formal letter/document; 2. you have to consider the reader(s) of your resume may not know what is IMSAS department) announces high performers in some of their modules. I had the highest marks in Mathematics, Physics and Chemistry (Is it necessary for you to tell how many subjects you studied in the resume? I would leave it out if I were you because it sounds tedious.).



Hope this helps and good luck in job hunting!
2008-08-21 4:51 am
hi, kitty chan

i am going to write the sentence in my resume/cv, do u think your the answer is suitable?
2008-08-12 6:32 am
When the IMSAS department first notified the names of the top students in some modules in 2008, whereas in three out of the four notified modules that I took, I was the top student in the modules mathematics, physics and chemistry.
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