招英文神手入來幫我篇會考英文作文比分 2008CE(20點)

2008-08-10 11:28 pm
Describe your feelings when you return to Hong Kong

My look gaped at everything surrounded me when I was in the concourse . I could feel my heat beating faster and succus running on my forehead . A few mintues later ,I was able to relax myself clearly and my breath was easy . I thought why so many animals walked in the pavement as I entered the zoo and its seemed were released form the cage in Hong Kong in 2015.The advertisement about the pet was hang on the high-rise everywhere . Mary was surppiser than I had been .She was interested in my deep brown complexion since I had been in Australia for study for 7 years .

Mary understand thatd why I was so shock in these and expressed ''Following , you went abord in two years later ,the government and the legislative reform reached an agrenment and gave a law that was a suggestion to cancel the limit of animal in the public and concourse green light .'But ,I was disfavored rather than glad , as matter of fact I didn\\\'t like animal anymore and we were different about the matter .

Sudduntly , we were noticed by something blasting out form the alleyway like something big fell on the ground .Few minute later ,the kitten went confusedly away from the alletway with blood and some voice horrible and cruel was borken out from the alleyway .The younger was lying on the ground with a pool of blood and bited by two or three dogs .He seemed to give up struggle and his voice was thick with bitterness .We were shocked and shivering by that . But , i took a brace to go to his rescue by the crabstick in time . Those dogs notied that and gnared to me . Then I brandished my crabstick .Its were scared
and ran away . Mary called for help .Ten minutes late , police and ambulance arrived .The younger was sent hospital .

In my thought , Hong Kong aren\\\'t a safe city and there aren\\\'t suited for people for lived .I\\\'d rather I had not been there .But , there was I lived in my childhood , I hope everying goes well for there .

回答 (2)

2008-08-12 6:16 am
✔ 最佳答案
that's crap...
do more reading....
that's really help if you wanna shift to the next level
2008-08-11 1:24 am
2008 CE?

It is terrrible. Too many mistakes.
level 1 or U ?


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