”Harry Potter 1'' 's comment (20!!!!!!! Quite easy!! )

Harry

2008-08-08 5:36 am

Please help me to write 130 words of comment for "Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone".

Here is my own comment~

As you know, Roald Dahl’s stories are full of surprises and jokes. I think Rowling is as good as him. Magic seems unreal and faked, but she makes use of the names to make the magic world legendary.

Rowling uses classic narrative devices with flair and originality and delivers a complex and demanding plot in the form of a hugely entertaining thriller. Even a three years old child will love to read it.

Here's already 73 words.

Please help me to add words to 130 and write another passage to 80 words.

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Pak Man

2008-08-17 6:00 am

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Once I read the harry potter,the plot are fascinating.One of the part is harry potter played in the quidditch represented the gryffindor house. he caught the snittch from his mouth!Narrowly bit the slytherin house.
Harry potter's friend hermoine granger and ron weasley sacrificed themselves and helped him to get the stones.And can have the good friendship

I think Rowling is as good as him. Magic seems unreal and faked, but she makes use of the names to make the magic world legendary.

Rowling uses classic narrative devices with flair and originality and delivers a complex and demanding plot in the form of a hugely entertaining thriller. Even a three years old child will love to read it.

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