[英文一問] 文法問題.

"I hope all lovers can find that a fine memory in today."
本句問題有幾個：
１．如果 find 後加 that，咁 that 就係帶出一個 that clause，必定係一句完整句子，如：I found that the car was gone.
所以 that 要刪去。
２．memory 單數時往往解作「記憶力」，作「回憶」解時多用複數，我地亦會用到一個靚ｄo既方法去講「美好回憶」：fond memories
３．today 毋須用 preposition 帶出，如 I have not seen him today.
４．find 係「找到」之意，亦可作「感到」解。但兩個都唔係你想要o既意思，不如回歸基本，用 have。但如果你係想講「我希望所有情侶今天帶著美好的回憶離開（此處）」，咁就可以用 leave with fond memories of today.
所以謹以此版本供參考：
I hope all lovers can leave with fond memories of today.
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仲想簡單ｄ？如果聽／睇到呢句o既人都係你o既目標（即情侶），咁就可以變成：
May all of you leave with fond memories of today.
May 呢度唔係解「可以」，唔係請求，而係帶出一個祝願。

1.這句英文有錯文法
2. today,I hope all lovers can find that a fine memory .
3.I hope all lovers can find that in today a fine memory .

1 有
2 I hope all lovers can have a fine memory today.

2008-08-07 14:22:18 補充：
I hope all lovers can have a good memory today.

I hope all lovers can have a good memory today!