can you improve this sentence?
2008-08-07 4:27 am
I don't think this is an appropriate step toward the freedom of our country.
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2008-08-08 11:07 am
✔ 最佳答案
I don't think this is an appropriate step toward the freedom of our country. To be changed to :
I don't think it appropriate to take such step as a move to enhance the freedom of our country.
參考: Myself
2008-08-12 10:22 pm
I would rewrite it as:
I don't think this is an appropriate approach towards the liberty of our country.
I don't think this is an appropriate approach towards the liberty of our country.
2008-08-07 10:21 pm
I don't think this is an appropriate step toward the freedom of our country.
For me, it is not a proper move towards the freedom of our country.
For me, it is not a proper move towards the freedom of our country.
參考: Own
2008-08-07 10:30 am
Maybe it is not a suitable mean to solve the problem of freedom of our country.
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